Inconclusive ~ Senryu Series. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Inconclusive ~ Senryu Series.

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brainstorming meeting
six crows gathered together
board meeting dismissed

community hall
mathematician's triangle
doesn't connect with.

a summit was called
clouds gathered all together
wind dispersed, apart.

Sunday, April 25, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: satire of social classes,religion,meeting
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I am targeting here the modern style of inconclusiveness, where people meet at various forums, summits, road-shows, sermons, AGM (Annual General meeting) , Board meetings etc … and the results are well know. At Board meeting, all are present with their own agenda; nobody in mood to listen others. Community hall: Gathering of religious people and their followers. (Marking their attendance to Almighty) . Summits: On anything, Global warming, Recession, Gulf summit, European summit etc…
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 25 April 2021

Brilliant poem. I think I am going to attend a meeting know...

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Michael Jack 26 April 2021

I wish you a very Happy Birthday.

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Deepak S S 26 April 2021

HA HA HA LOL...We see and we believe they are fruitful whereas they are just eye washing act.

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Rajnish Manga 26 April 2021

A very objective observation. Your notes give an overview.

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Varsha M 26 April 2021

Sir you very rightly said. We don't know what we have become now. I still remember my childhood days. I kept on doing something thought i didnot understand why and how but st every moment bi learned something. Good poem. Thank-you for sharing.

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 25 April 2021

All fight no work. Indeed an inconclusiveness situation nicely explored. Interesting.

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