My incomplete story could not be completed by her incomplete story
Nevertheless we shared our Heart's agony
She shed some tears and I also did not control my tears
This is how we eased our heart's pain
She came from the other end of the river and I joined from this end
And we submerged in the current of Heart
Neither she said anything and Nor did I
Our eyes did the talking and heart understood
She breath a little and my heart beats increased
This is how we passed our life together
She sheds some tears and this shedding expresses emotion and agony. From the other end of the river you hear her beats of heart and feel the emotion. Life is complete when love is there. This poem is very interestingly penned. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned.
Outstanding poem........Both versions are fantastic. Loved reading it and will write my poem on this..10
Class............10 Neither she said anything and Nor did I Our eyes did the talking and heart understood
What a wonderful story of love. Very captivating that captures a true and one of a kind love that holds us spellbound. Beautifully written. Loved reading it.
She came from the other end of the river and I joined from this end And we submerged in the current of Heart ......superb the whole poem on the tone of Ghazal; enjoyable; pleasure to read this earthly life is incomplete traveling every incomplete can not complete though come together live together, die together but it's true that both incomplete journey can make ease the whole life......
बहुत सही लिखा आपने अधूरी कहानियां ही इंसान को हमेशा सोचने पर मजबूर करती है
Some stories remains incomplete and they gets remembered Nice poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
बहुत ही बेहतरीन पंक्तियाँ. दिल खुश हो गया अगर जिंदगी देती हैं ग़म, तो तुम साथ मेरा देना।। बाँट लेगे ग़म थोड़ा - थोड़ा, . बस तुम साथ मेरा देना।। मैं कुछ आँसू तुम्हारे पोछू, कुछ आँसू तुम मेरे पोछना।। बस तुम साथ मेरा देना।। Rated 100++