Independence Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

Independence

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Aim! !
To be certain;

Claim!
With the muse of the truth.

To know yourself,
To understand yourself;

To know myself,
To understand myself;

Our Beings! !
Aims and objectives;

A message from Adam and Eve,
Living and learning always on earth.

Yet beyond us lies the truth,
The truth about real life!

With the deal of righteous laws;
Able to seal each and every heart with righteous morals.

Evidence,
Independence,

Executed with the beauty of creation!
Able to see the light of the truth.

Styles and symbols,
To this breathing flute;

Cute is the truth! !
But hatred had taken over;

Seeing all the wars around us today!
With the wickedness of mankind on earth.

Sacred store for children,
Many white women want to have children! But not their fathers;
And many black fathers have fallen victims to them.

Yes! Just look around you;
With the quell of the music of this act;

In a land with different laws,
Allowing things to go the other way round.

Voices of the heavenly harmony watching us on earth,
Seeing the ways of mankind;

Racism! The common voice to hear from the wicked ones;
Always against the ways of the truth! !

Light to the world with the muse of the truth,
Without racism;

Peace and love,
Better than hatred and war;

Independence,
But are we free? !

Look around you and see things yourself,
Able to judge what is right or wrong.










































































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Monday, March 26, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: expressions,humanity,rules,society,writing,wrong vs. right
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amarjit Ghumman 16 September 2019

Wonderful and very mature thoughts. You are great poet. God Bless you .

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 March 2018

To be certain! ! Facing the ways of life. The truth is the key. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 March 2018

Mankind! Wake up! ! Face the truth! ! ! Let us live in peace than with hatred and war. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Michael Hopkins 26 March 2018

Very thoughtful and well executed poem Edward. Well done.

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 March 2018

World Peace! ! But hatred and war rules! Why? Let us wake up and face the truth.

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