Independence Day We Gather At Friends' Home (Senryu) Poem by NHIEN NGUYEN MD

Independence Day We Gather At Friends' Home (Senryu)

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Independence Day
We gather at our friends' home:
Becky and Joe's nest.

We are group of friends.
Wives started E.T.C club*
Husbands joined as guests.

Today, monthly meet
Becky volunteers as host
All come except one.

Joe has many Koi's
His pond layout is superb
His fish colorful.

During vacation
Our grand children come along
I watch small grand son.

We enjoy friendships
On this special occasion:
Independence Day.

NHIEN NGUYEN MD
7/4/2017

Thursday, July 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship,gathering,independence day
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
*E.T.C stands for Eat, Talk, Craft.This is to appreciate our friendships of many years which are hard to find and for Becky and Joe as the hosts.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Duke 19 July 2017

This is a very special poem for us! We also appreciate the many years of friendship with you and the others in ETC and their spouses. That was a very nice afternoon for us, and now it is even more special after being remembered in a poem! Thank you so much!

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Nhien Nguyen 20 July 2017

Thank you, Becky and Joe. We are very lucky for having you both in our lives, and on earth! Nhien

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Dung Nguyen 19 July 2017

Thank you for sharing this thoughtful Senryu new poem: We are group of friends, Wives started E.T.C club* Husband joined as guests.....An interesting interpretation. Sweet image of friendships through words. Good work. I am happy for you, having such precious friendships. Enjoy your life!

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Nhien Nguyen 20 July 2017

How true, for having precious friendships! ! ! Thank you for your kind comments! Nhien.

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