Pranab K. Chakraborty

Gold Star - 15,959 Points (West Bengal)

India And Cows - Poem by Pranab K. Chakraborty

Cows are more valuable
than human life

biggest democratic country
India now fights for cows
to keep their right
tight to their flesh

the tragedy begins
when flesh of human being
scattered on the foot
by gang beating
to keep sanctity
of cow

it's the high time
to decide
who will serve to whom!

Pranab k c

Topic(s) of this poem: poetry

Comments about India And Cows by Pranab K. Chakraborty

  • (11/22/2015 8:41:00 PM)

    An expressive and a thought provoking write. (Report) Reply

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  • Kelly Kurt (11/9/2015 2:39:00 PM)

    All religions are relics, mythological and superstitious anchors of the 21st century. How obvious when a cow is given more concern than a human (Report) Reply

  • Pranab K Chakraborty (11/9/2015 12:20:00 PM)

    To: Luis Estable

    It was not at all a try to compose good poetry. It was a try to catch your attention on recent political circumstances in Indian panorama. If you are caught by the content, will try to know from news media the more of it. Poetry, at least not at all any sub-editorial speech of a news paper.

    Thank you for your wise advise, next time I will call you to deliver your analytical advise to make any poem a good poem but strictly not this time. Thank you again.

    Pranab k c.
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  • (11/9/2015 7:15:00 AM)

    This poem falls short of making a good case poetically. As it stands now it is incomplete and does not tell anything that can be considered a good and complete poem.

    I do not really know what you were trying to do here. You try to talk of cows in that country, but the case is badly made when you tried to tell it as a poetic creation.

    This try needs much work to make it read as if it were good poetry. Go ahead and work on it. I do strongly advise you to do this.

    The best to you!

    Luis Estable
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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 9, 2015

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