Individual Focus Poem by Doom & Gloom

Individual Focus

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I was placed on a pedestal and asked to perform
I was striped of my pride and open to scorn
My inner most feelings displayed to all
Yet I hold my head high and refuse to fall

Naked, a newfound purity

I’m blinded by light, but my focus remains
Surrounded by faces without any names
My presence encourages cheers from below
The people demand a start to the show

Expectations, belief's of the blind

Emotions run high, I shout for relief
Fear exchanged for adrenaline release
A glimmer appears in the eyes of the throng
The shout now descends to the level of song

Vanity, corner stone of expression

Wednesday, February 21, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: expectations,pride
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ann Beard 11 July 2007

I Like this poem very much but wish the writer was not callen Doom and Gloom.

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Malini Kadir 13 April 2007

I was placed on a pedestal and asked to perform I was striped of my pride and open to scorn My inner most feelings displayed to all Yet I hold my head high and refuse to fall ...............................................................wonderful!

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Alison Smith 21 February 2007

Focal point is most profound.... Alison

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