Infatuation (Senryu) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Infatuation (Senryu)

Rating: 4.8


shudder at your sight
my avoidance secretly
desires encounter

Thursday, September 18, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: infatuation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
E Nigma 11 November 2014

Almost reminds you of the forbidden fruit look but don't touch, cause once you touch you want to taste and so on. This really is a romantic infatuation between self restraint and pure unbridled passions lingering helplessly below the surface of composure. Love it Mihaela =)

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Anthony Burkett 19 October 2014

evoked emotions.... oooooh! Mmmmmmm!

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Heather Wilkins 08 October 2014

a lovely senryu one of my favorite forms

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Daniel Brick 22 September 2014

I was unfamiliar with the term SENRYU. No problem - I bought Edward Hirsch's new book A POET'S GLOSSARY, an 800-page dictionary for which he wrote ALL THE ENTRIES. Amazing achievement! So a senryu is a haiku about human nature. INFATUATION takes us to the heart of being human and deals with the heart, hungry, yearning, loving but also hesitant, cautious, suffering. I'm reminded of the Ang Lee film LUST, CAUTION, a striking exploration of a dangerous love and the dire consequences of surrender to passion.

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