Innocence Poem by Amity Quinn

Innocence



Unaware-underwater
Spurting bubbles, spurting
Innocence.
Remember temptation?
Hips swing, a moist face
Dancing.
The shining pool, her spirit dove
Into the escape hole.
Book.
Grassy jeans-an empty space
At her side.
Lonliness has passed-
A New Beggining.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paige Nielsen 09 May 2009

i remember this! ! I liked it then, and I like it now...best line: 'remember temptation? '. Profundity within minimalism, my dear, quite a feat.

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Kaitlyn Henning 08 May 2009

I like the imagary and how you jumped from one scene to another. Good Job!

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Deena Hardy 08 May 2009

i like it it's very um descriptive

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Josh Haines 07 May 2009

The image of a new beginning is incredible.

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Melissa Black 07 May 2009

:) Holy crizap! That was very amazing, just like you are :)

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