Unaware-underwater
Spurting bubbles, spurting
Innocence.
Remember temptation?
Hips swing, a moist face
Dancing.
The shining pool, her spirit dove
Into the escape hole.
Book.
Grassy jeans-an empty space
At her side.
Lonliness has passed-
A New Beggining.
I like the imagary and how you jumped from one scene to another. Good Job!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i remember this! ! I liked it then, and I like it now...best line: 'remember temptation? '. Profundity within minimalism, my dear, quite a feat.