Inside Theme Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Inside Theme

Rating: 5.0


I do not think
I learned something
I haven't hitherto seen
Across the board
You played a game
That no less bewitched me

Not that I was yielding,
Not that I was naive,
I thought of not to let you down
I let you win the race!

Apples in the distance ripe
Blue water in the stream
Birds that flock around those blooms
I rejoice in my theme...

Nov 25th,2020

Thursday, November 26, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: game,nature,poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 27 November 2020

The last Stanza is much enchanted and impressive. You have so beautifully delineated this poem on nature and poetry. Thanks for sharing. Five stars.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 26 November 2020

A well crafted poem.... Truly profound and poetic....5 stars *****

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Aarzoo Mehek 26 November 2020

Letting go and letting win is the sign of maturity. Very nice poem.

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