Insomnia (The Night After...) Poem by Alice Cuenca
Insomnia (The Night After...)
Colors of darkness crumble
heavy eyelids
in constant struggle...
grain of light peeks through the horizon
touching the meadows
a new day has begun
conforming...
to the monotony of daily living
my filled heart cave-in
heavy with emptiness
this space...
besieged between stilly moments
'me' at the center...
with frozen colors
thawed beneath the sun
drifting in liquified hues
as the twilight verge on,
I am consumed again by the night
very nice! ! ! =) it gives me somehow a sense of sadness... that something is or has been bothering you... but well written...its like the emotions are tangible... I voted for it sis. I have a new poem...Freedon [from a cynic's eye], if you have time please check it out...and vote for it [if you want to...hehehe]
the dust the mist the white lightning awaken misery travels never come back
great lines here and the maze it creates, , , real poetic metaphor
'I am consumed again by the night' a beautiful line on insomonia. Marvellous!
'consumed by the night' - a memorable phrase relating it to the insomnia
dark poetry... lovin it! ! ! nice imageries too! ! did this actually happened to you?
Wonderfully written poem. Your choice of words is exquisite…with frozen colors / thawed beneath the sun / drifting in liquefied hues…I simply love these lines in particular.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Galing nito kapatid. keep writing and I know you can write more wonderful flowers of your thoughts and the deepness of your soul. I love you, melvin