Valerie Dohren

Gold Star - 6,968 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Into The Deep - Poem by Valerie Dohren

Falling slowly into the deep
Slipping away from me
Falling yet through the bounds of time
Back to reality

Where worlds collide and disappear
Where all is calm and still
And so to be in perfect peace
Our purpose to fulfil

Falling slowly into the deep
Passing through layers of me
Watching, waiting for all that is
To see, to know, to be

Then with the coming of the dawn
To watch the rising sun
Growing brighter and brighter still
`Til all are joined as one

Falling slowly into the deep
Towards eternity
Slipping away from all that is
Into the shining sea


Comments about Into The Deep by Valerie Dohren

  • Akhtar Jawad (3/31/2018 9:28:00 PM)


    Man has an ocean inside and,
    Falling slowly into the deep
    Towards eternity
    Slipping away from all that is
    Into the shining sea
    Simply great thought.
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  • Robert Green (4/9/2012 4:00:00 PM)


    Hope you can get there, for some its too far, a great thought and write again Val :) (Report) Reply

  • Diane Hine (4/2/2012 8:38:00 AM)


    Very peaceful letting go of anxiety- lovely thought. (Report) Reply

  • Vanessa Hughes (3/30/2012 12:33:00 AM)


    Love this too, the deep describes our innermost peace perfectly. x (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 10, 2012



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