Intoxicating My Being Poem by Marieta Maglas

Intoxicating My Being

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I was hiding from a light growing brighter and brighter
On a day when the sun rose earlier without any warning,
Intoxicating my being
You were seemingly still sleeping,
But I felt your wish growing brighter and brighter
In that moment when you turned suddenly to me
Wearisomely to kiss me, without any warning,
Until your kisses intoxicated my being.
So closed to you I felt just to hear
Your inner cry.
I saw love growing brighter and brighter
In your eyes and your heart began to beat faster without any warning.
A part of me you became
To synthesize my dreams.
I opened my crystal memories to breathe you
In forgiveness and love.
Your warm love
Was a geyser
In the middle of my glaciation.
You could satisfy my painful concatemer.
Our future was seemingly laying in the ashes of my dying loneliness.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stefanie Fontker 30 September 2011

Very beautiful. You've presented some amazing metaphors here, and some fantastic lines. 'On a day when the sun rose earlier without warning me, ' I believe this is my favourite one. Great writing.

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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