Is She The Queen? Poem by Floyd Zimmerman

Is She The Queen?

Rating: 5.0


Is she the Queen
Of the age, of reason;

Whose name is Passion
Whose gown is Beauty
Whose crown is Slander;

Whose palace is Freedom
In the kingdom of Prisons,
Beneath the envious face of the Sun?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Philosophy of a DewyFlower 03 September 2009

amazing! well expressed! a perfect queen.

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Lynda Robson 03 September 2009

Interesting read Floyd, well thought out 10 Lynda

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 03 September 2009

Well written, Floyed. Some good thoughts are peeping through the lines. Best Wishes Naseer

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Obinna Eruchie 03 September 2009

Interesting concept, your poem provides.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 03 September 2009

yOUR NAME REMINDS ME OF THE FAME rOCK gROUP 'pINK Floyd'.The song 'shine on you crazy diamond' suits this poem well.Good writes Floyd.

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Eyan Desir 13 September 2009

Good write...well expressed in short words

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Floyd Zimmerman 10 September 2009

Erm, i don't think these terms are contradictory.

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 09 September 2009

Queen, reason, passion, beauty... unusual oxymoron.

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Barbara Terry 04 September 2009

You have written about the perfect queen that is all of this and much much more. Before we go poking our noses into someone else's business, we should make sure first that, our own minds are clear and our hearts are pure. I echo what Lynda said that this is an 'interesting read Floyd, well thought out'. A 10+++++ Love & hugs, Barbara

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 03 September 2009

Royally short and hastily interesting!

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