Floyd Zimmerman

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The Struggle Of A Flower - Poem by Floyd Zimmerman

So the day began with rain,
Thrown down in tantrums of tears.
I could only watch, in vain,
The struggle of a flower.


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  • Jen Capaldi (10/10/2009 10:52:00 PM)

    a short on words poem that it certainly not short in deep symbolic meaning. a extrememly welled penned peice that cuts straight to the point. great poem my friend. as always, you have shown you are a wonderful poet my friend.10+++
    Jen
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  • Lynda Robson (10/5/2009 4:37:00 PM)

    Short but says so much
    10
    Lynda
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  • Luwi HabteLuwi Habte (10/4/2009 1:25:00 PM)

    wow, short but a nice piece
    well done
    luwi
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  • Ivor Hogg (10/4/2009 9:11:00 AM)

    terse verse that packs a punch (Report)Reply

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  • C. P. SharmaC. P. Sharma (10/1/2009 2:56:00 AM)

    Feelingly penned poem. Tears are the distilled wisdom, the essence of the struggle for existence.
    CP
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  • C. P. SharmaC. P. Sharma (10/1/2009 2:55:00 AM)

    Feelingly penned poem. Tears are the distilled wisdom, the essence of the struggle for existence.
    CP
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  • Obinna Eruchie (9/30/2009 9:35:00 AM)

    Deep and touching it is. (Report)Reply

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  • Marieta Maglas (9/30/2009 9:07:00 AM)

    nice poem...touching...10+ (Report)Reply

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  • Philosophy of a DewyFlower (9/30/2009 4:12:00 AM)

    Short but DEEP.
    10 for the SYMBOLISM
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  • Eyan Desir (9/30/2009 3:10:00 AM)

    Short but leaves a reader pondering (Report)Reply

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  • Omar Ibrahim (9/30/2009 2:54:00 AM)

    simple but meaningful poem....entitled by an attention grabbing title.....really wonderful keep it up and send my greetings to the english people... (Report)Reply

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  • Joseph Poewhit (9/29/2009 6:33:00 PM)

    Even flowers have there days (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 29, 2009



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