Charlie F. Kane

Rookie (14/1/1989 / Solihull, Birmingham)

Is There Anybody Out There? - Poem by Charlie F. Kane

Hello,
Is that you over there?
Can you see me?
Don't walk away, I'm here!
Can you hear me?
Shall I speak a little louder?
Don't go away, I'm here!
Won't you come and speak to me,
Say anything is all you have to do,
So don't walk away,
I'm only here.

Please,
Is there anybody out there?
Won't somebody talk to me?
Am I alone?
I don't think so,
So, please,
Is there anybody out there?

Is it something I said?
Why do you leave me alone?
Was it something I did?
I could go back and change
If you stopped walking away from me.
Why am I feeling this way?
I did nothing wrong,
So please stop walking away.

Please,
Is there anybody out there?
Won't somebody talk to me?
Am I alone?
I don't think so,
So, please,
Is there anybody out there?

Left here all alone,
Banging my head against the wall,
There isn't anyone out there.
They left me all alone.
What will they say now I'm gone?
Another mad buggar not all there,
Was never right,
Never normal.
All I wanted was a word,
So why did you walk away?
Did you stop and think?
How do you feel,
Knowing I'm banging my head
Against the wall?

23/3/06


Comments about Is There Anybody Out There? by Charlie F. Kane

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (5/17/2006 2:53:00 PM)


    STRONG WRITE, CHARLIE...YOU GOT ME THINKIN' OF ' FLOYD '' WHILE
    INDULGING IN THIS PIECE...GOOD STRUCTURE, NICE FLUX...EVER DEAD THE LYRICS OF THE 70's & 80's ROCK GROUP, KING CRIMSON? CHECK IT
    OUT...I TOLD POE TO, BUT HE NEVER GOT BACK TO ME....EVER WRITE
    CRYPTIC VERSE...TIS A SPOOKED VENTURE, BUT A BASH OF FUN...
    A TEN FOR THE ONE OUT THERE...
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  • (3/27/2006 3:56:00 PM)


    ..But arent we all alone...thanks to solipscism? ?
    I ask you that my friends....
    sebxx
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  • (3/25/2006 10:39:00 AM)


    Ok ill say something different.... hmmm..... distance in your mind and distance in physical being are two different things... but with this you cant tell great job
    love,
    Melissa
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  • (3/23/2006 1:46:00 PM)


    This poem relates to the way a lot of people think. The only thing I really didn't like is why would you ask if you're alone if you don't think your alone? But otherwise awesome job! (Report) Reply

  • (3/23/2006 1:42:00 PM)


    Its a fabulous piece about what everybody's thinking but no ones saying (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 23, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 8, 2010


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