Issue Of The British Underclass. (Britain 1980's) Poem by Gillian.E. Shaw

Issue Of The British Underclass. (Britain 1980's)

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Can one believe the artless truth
how much love costs with illicit youth?
Cast felons must pay as pay they did
legitimate choice once made well hid.

Civil dispatches; forms of menace.
Entitlements like unseen fetters.
Thus denied the human need to reap
and sow... save fifteen pounds a week.

Base retribution enforced, applied.
Destitute, difficult but alive.
Who conceived to criminalize man
and babe, in that green and pleasant land?

For those who know.
October 2005.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Not a member No 4 03 February 2007

First rate poetry. Very effective use of language and image to portray a particular interpretation/explanation of certain aspects of a very challenging time.

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Declan McHenry 20 July 2006

Now that Gillian is clever, and acerbic, social commentary. Grand!

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Jerry Hughes 13 May 2006

This compliments my poem Feral Kids perfectly...

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Raynette Eitel 24 October 2005

Well-said, Gillian. I hadn't seen this issue dealt with in poetry and it's about time. Raynette

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