It Poem by Daniel Brick

It

Rating: 5.0


It doesn't demand, extra space.
As for time, it takes what is given
and asks for nothing further. In this
it is like a flower, whose petals
spread perfume for all to smell. It is
like a comet. sweeping across the sky:
just a flash of light, and darkness returns.
It is like a bedtime story that summons
immediate sleep. It is like itself,
a bell ringing in solitude, or a wounded animal
recovering in seclusion, or a demi-god
taking one fateful step after another
until he reaches the edge of his divinity.
It's like all of that.

Thursday, October 17, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 06 December 2022

A fantastic poem from the pen of a great modern poet.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 26 October 2019

Wow awesome similes you created in this fabulous description of time. The comparisons are creatively formulated. Kudos. Pls pleez do comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too titled, ' smart phones and smart cars...."

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Glen Kappy 22 October 2019

I find your characterizations of time fascinating, Daniel (am I reading this right?) . The bell ringing and wounded animal images zing for me. -Glen

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