It Has Been So Long... Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

It Has Been So Long...

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It has been so long since I last saw you…
I am afraid that I may have forgotten
To seek your sight

In places that I go:
Without my being there.

You have been with me for so long…
I no longer count the seasons,
The quivery stars, the glances we imparted…

I have been wandering through years, lost and alone;
Alone with your phantom, looking for you:
It felt so lonely…

Yet, not lonelier and desolate than now,
When you seldom appear to me:
It's been so long, my dearest…!

Sometimes, in my dreams,
I wake up with a teardrop dripping down my face:
Washing you away, taking you further from me:

I can no longer hold you
In this tired mind of mine the way I used to:
I lost you with losing myself.

Bereft of love—I am bereft of life:
You cannot survive in an empty shell!

For that is what I have become:
An empty shell, rustling aimlessly
In a mad ocean…

Tuesday, October 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: seasons
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 19 November 2015

Defining Intense Times In Life an etching echo silhouette defining intense times in life spiderweb strand steel issues Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'It's Been So Long...' by Mihaela Pirjol. Dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol.

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Terry Craddock 19 November 2015

Read Poem Ephemeral Pages sleepless insomnia inspires soft silk searches returning to recent read poem ephemeral pages exquisite stunning gloriously beautiful set nets Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'It's Been So Long' by Mihaela Pirjol. Dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol.

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Terry Craddock 18 November 2015

returned to this poem in the middle of the night because it is exquisite, stunning, gloriously beautiful :) 'It’s been so long since I last saw you, I am afraid that I may have forgotten To seek your sight In places that I go, Without my being there; You have been with me for so long… I no longer count the seasons; The quivery stars, the glances we imparted.....' stanza after stanza carries me away :) wonderful :)

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Terry Craddock 14 October 2015

'I have been wandering through years lost and alone; Alone with your phantom looking for you; It felt so lonely… ' seems like an etching echo silhouette defining a few intense times in my life, so wonderfully written, saving a few of your recent poems now :)

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