Thursday, September 22, 2016

It Is The Gift Comments

Rating: 4.5

God's essence is love's image.
Jealousy weakens love's vowed promise.
Honesty gives love its power.
Always keep love's fire burning.
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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes
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Tom Billsborough 22 September 2016

I like the poem but wouldn't personally involve God, I'm afraid.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 22 September 2016

Very true. Honesty gives love it's power. Thanks for sharing this beautifully conceived meaningful poem.10 points.

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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Baltimore, Maryland
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