Liam Hughes
Bedfordshire, UK
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It's A Hard Road

Rating: 4.7
I jumped on the train
I left this old town
I escaped the rain
I'm no longer down
The wheels start to turn
My worries are gone
I have lots to learn
About the trail that I'm on
As I look around
I see my new friend
I know I am bound
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Friday, September 14, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: travel
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Bharati Nayak 20 June 2020
I jumped on the train I left this old town I escaped the rain I'm no longer down The wheels start to turn My worries are gone I have lots to learn About the trail that I'm on - -A great poem.Yes, life a journey to new destinations.
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Sara Militello 08 August 2017
I forgot to rate this poem. I give it a ten because I like the minimalist style you use.
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Sara Militello 08 August 2017
Nice poem. Great sentiments it expresses. It's quite uplifting and well said. No unnecessary words; right to the point you go. You know the road is hard but seem to feel sure the trip for adventure and learning will be worth it. Great attitude!
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Cigeng Zhang 24 January 2017
I like your natural writing style. I get the encouraged feeling by reading the poem.You travel like a wind, riding on your free soul. A wonderful poem. I just want to find the road that is best. A good write. Me too, always want to find such a road.
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Howard Savage 05 June 2016
Great poem of Profound reality, keep writing.
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Richard Beevor 01 November 2015
Hi Liam, I love the travel/journey theme, it's a great subject for poems and this one has the extra quality that it would make a good song lyric, exceptional work my friend :)
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Hazel Durham 19 July 2015
I felt your excitement at the adventure ahead of you with the train's wheels in motion and your heart and thoughts racing with new places, new ideas to a great adventure of the unknown! Great write!
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Godfrey Morris 31 May 2015
Amazing poem this one. It flowed well great message as well. Thanks for sharing
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