It's Better....... Poem by M. Asim Nehal

It's Better.......

Rating: 5.0


Tears are flowing in dilemma
Let it flow out to cool down, it's better

Till when should I preserve this with me?
Let is go out with my thoughts, it's better

They gave me respite for a long time
Let me pay the debts, it's better

My heart is carrying a burden for long
Let is come out in words, it's better

It hurts and painful when beloved apart
Let this moment pass peacefully, it's better

I want to forget them yet they come wandering
Let these memories fade with time, it's better

For long the fisherman took the dip in this sea
Let the pearl to be found, it's better.

Wednesday, January 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Kash ma kash ki zindagi mein behte hain ansoo mere
Ye dard nikal jaye to achcha hai

Kab tak rakhoon sambhal kar daaman mein apne
Tera khayal nikal jaye to achcha hai

Milti gayi mohlat ab aur kitni milne doon
Ye karz utar jaye to achcha hai

Dil per mere bojh hai izhaar karne ka unse
Ye baat nikal jaye to achcha hai

Taqleef dete hain ye judai ke pal
Ye lamha guzar jaye to achcha hai

Bhoolna chahta hoon main jinhe wo yaad aate hain
Ye yadein mit jaye to achcha hai

Badi muddat se gotakhor laga rahe hain dubkiyan
Ye moti mil hi jaye to achcha hai
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darren Jkoeryo 06 January 2016

Near to truth, it's always better to keep patience.

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Rajnish Manga 06 January 2016

The poem treats the ups and downs of a relationship rather eloquently along with the probable ways of resolving the same. Thank you for sharing this fantastic poem, Md. Asim ji. I want to forget them yet they come wandering Let these memories fade with time, it's better

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Kelly Kurt 06 January 2016

Another great philosophical poem. Let the painful memories fade, as they tend to do

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Aarzoo Mehek 06 January 2016

Badi muddat se gotakhor laga rahe hain dubkiyan Ye moti mil hi jaye to achcha hai Anginat khwahishein aur uske poore hone ki umeed...issi kashmakash ka naam zindagi hai..bohot hi khoobsurat kalam aur english ka transleration bhi khoob hai. Dilli daad aur..10

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