It's Not Nice To Mess With The Enviroment Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

It's Not Nice To Mess With The Enviroment

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It was found on our lawn
Even closer to our front door
An enviromental nightmare, it was
We cannot take any more!

It smelled like varnished wooden floors
The odor was noxious and crude
Tracked in - this toxic mess by winter slippers...
Altering our physical health and mood!

The smell burns our eyes and nose
This deliberate act was also performed in the back
It's an aroma from Hell
Yet, another vicious attack!

The culprit is looking for 'Redemption'...
But if he continues his devious hurtful course
There will be no redeeming of his evil soul
For he is a 'Psychopath' unable to feel remorse!



By, Theodora Onken

December 11, 2016

Sunday, December 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: environment,evil,health,mood,redemption,smelling,winter,wooden
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The utmost anger some are feeling towards one human being. They already had enough 4 years ago...he simply does not know when to quit. He has absolutely 'no shame'. Many believe he is Satan Incarnate...the absolute worst of the worst. For the victims- -'Still water runs deep'
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Theodora Onken 12 December 2016

i am always amazed to find that someone has actually read something of mine and commented. This site has changed- when i say changed, i mean, totally. Back in 2005 it was a really different place. I miss that place a lot and all of the poets who wrote here. Miss Tara the most and Marci. JoAnn and Meggie also...Herbert passed away- -but James S. is still alive. We still have Lawrence and Mr. Ryan but like i say so many have left. Which may be what i will be doing next.

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Bill Cantrell 11 December 2016

It is indeed a shame when one individual causes so much trouble for others, I'm a firm believer that those truly looking for redemption will find it, I hope so in this case, the environment needs all the help it can get.

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Theodora Onken 12 December 2016

Thank you Bill for taking the time to review my words. Your input is always appreciated. Finding your comment came as a nice surprise as i have been thinking about removing all my work, the good and the bad from here. It seems that no one wants to comment anymore; not sure if it is my writing or if or if it is because i am unliked by most on this site now. Have always loved this site and have been here since 2005. This is the first time i have ever encountered - the abscence of poets comments. So many good poets are gone. They have moved to other sites. Suppose there is such a thing as being black-balled but if that is what is going on i have no idea why. Anyway, thank you again, Bill.

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