It's Pinkness I Need

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Pinkness I need neither white nor red,
Sleepiness I wish, neither living nor dead,
Loose grip of conscious, by a hard touch if it is raped,
So soft is my unconscious, it will be reshaped,
I am afraid my subconscious will suffer most,
Nightmares I may face with a terrifying ghost.

When the dawn broke it was a friend, I admire,
Sharing a pink write and promising pink dreams tonight,
Arresting the ghost who had enchanted my fairy, now free,
Smiled and hoped, pink songs, pink dances, in a pink flush light.

It's Pinkness I Need
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Thanks Marie shine for this freeing post.
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 April 2019

you sir now are IN THE PINK OF YOUR LIFE PH ALSO AGREES may be shall quickly

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A lovely poem with a meaningful message. We are reminded by this write that everything must be in moderation. Great imagery with a beautiful picture that enhances this marvelous write.

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 April 2019

Pinkness I need neither white nor red, ... My memories go back to my schooldays and to chemistry lab. Titration. A little more and you have transcended far beyond, not reached. A little less and you are too far still. Good one.

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Khalida Bano Ali 06 April 2019

Moderation is beauty.

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