Monday, October 12, 2015

It'sad Dog's Life Comments

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It's A Dog's Life

Blaze was dog tired as he opened his eyes early Thursday morning, staring at the wall. Took a look at his master, watched him snore awhile. Ahh what to do thought blaze as he reached his head down between his legs and gave his wee wee a brush of the tongue. Got up, shook himself, walked to the kitchen, ready to start his day.
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Wes Vogler 06 December 2015

I like your calling it a prose poem. Found it a little difficult to follow. Keep writing. We had dogs for sixty years. I will write of Bingo.

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Loke Kok Yee 13 October 2015

Sounds like great fun; leading a dogs life! Beginning to wonder who is the Master. Thanks Melvina

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Mj Lemon 12 October 2015

There is a profound sadness here...blended with some nice humour...an extended metaphor that captures a culture, a time, emotion....Yes, a dog's life....A great work.

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Kelly Kurt 12 October 2015

Absolutely delightful, Melvina. Thank you for letting us read this fun and beautifully written piece. Woof : -)

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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