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Its The Law

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Walking through this dark hallway,
My heart racing for the fear of what's next
My mind drifts back to how it all starts.

The law stands and the sentence holds
Yet it's our verdict to decide.
Before the world, the judgment comes
We step towards death abandoning life
It's now our cross to bear

But my heart still screams out its innocence
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Wednesday, July 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: fate
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It's basically a reflection of how we view ourselves
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM

rpentence underlines the poem; well emoteed

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G. Akanji Olaniyi 07 July 2016

Thoughtful and well crafted. Nice job! ! !

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Chinedu Dike 06 July 2016

An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned in good diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing Toluwanimi.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 July 2016

Heart still screams out its innocence. Very amazingly drafted and shared poem definitely this is. Wise sharing...10

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Thank you very much Kumarmani...

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