Jab se piya pardesh gaye hai
Chain-sukun sab rooth gaye hai
Aati nahi hai raaton me nindiya
Kaise kahoon sakhi birha ki batiyan..
Kaise kategi umar ye saari
Lagti nhi ab duniya ye pyari
Unke bina sab niras hai lage
Kaise kahoon sakhi, ab jee na lage…
Sajna -sawarna bhool gai hu
Preet me unke yun ghul gai hu
Bairan ho gai hai meri ratiyan
Kaise kahoon sakhi pir ki batiyan….
Yaadein unki bahut satati
Sham dhale purwa, jab mujhe chhu ke jati
Berang si ho gai hai zindagi sari
Kaise kahoon sakhi ye dastan humari…
Gumsum si baithi hun tabse
Tanha chhord gaye mere piya jab se
Raah dekhe nain pathraye
Abahu na aaye sajan mere
Beeti jaye ye zindagani
Kaise kahoon sakhi ye prem kahani…
Hi Havita, There is new very endearing comment on this lovely poem by Poet Ms Carol Nochols on the translation posted by me. Please take time to read. Thank you Dear Kavita. I too get a little appreciation because your poems.
Hi Kavita, The agony of Separation, Search, Pain and Longing heart-rendingly depicted. Jab se piya pardesh gaye hai Chain-sukun sab rooth gaye hai Aati nahi hai raaton me nindiya Kaise kahoon sakhi birha ki batiyan.. And necessarily, Kaise kategi umar ye saari Lagti nhi ab duniya ye pyari Unke bina sab niras hai lage Kaise kahoon sakhi, ab jee na lage… Very nice poem. Well done.10++++
Wow..this is Truely amazing...the feeling of separation is always painful which is really felt in every pin of this piece Great rhyming n a great poem...thanks a lot! ! ! !
thank you jaya das