Rating: 5.0

'Maa tu hoti pass agar'

Ro leti tere kandhe, pe sar rakh..
Kah deti tujhe dil ki baat..
So jati tere aanchal me main.
Maa Tu hoti pass agar..
Bachpan me jb thokar lagti.
Tu sahare deti Thi.
Paon me jb kante chubhte.
Teri siskiyan nikalti Thi..
Ab na koi sahare h, maa..
Na koi hmdard hai...
khud hasti hun,
khud roti hun..
ye duniya to khudgarj hai,
thamti fir bahein meri...
Maa tu hoti pass agar...

Friday, July 24, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: emotions
M Asim Nehal 09 November 2015

Maa ka pass hona kya mayne rakhta hai aapne sahi roop se likh diya......10

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Kavya . 01 December 2015

Moms are irreplaceable - this poem very neatly describes the role a Mother plays in our lives and how her absence makes us collapse! A good write

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Fabrizio Frosini 24 July 2015

Welcome at PoemHunter, Kavita but... what about an English translation..? ;)

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Aranthabailu Ummar 28 July 2015

Yeah it make Spence every one feeling it and getting it The presence and absence of maa does we can buy this by money

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Abhilasha Bhatt 13 January 2016

Touching poem.....a mother always give love blessings doesn't matters where we r or where she is....beautifully narrated...thanx for sharing

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Sahil Sharma 30 January 2017

Nice.. Aisa lgta h.. Kuch khi dil me baate chhupayiii h

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 January 2017

so lovely poem. i give full marks...10 I dream of heaven where you are now And request god to send back right now

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 September 2016

Well depiction having the importance of a mother. Many thanks dear Kavita, keep the ball rolling.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 September 2016

Well depiction having important of a mother. Thanks for sharing.

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Abduhoo Salamath 28 August 2016

Maa vaqiee Maa hoti hai...aur us ki yaad kia haoti hai is poem me bakhoobi izhar huva hai... bahuth khoob... Thanks for sharing... shairee kabhi purani nahi hotee... mere liye to hamesh taza hoti hai...

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