Knight Fizzstorm


Jaded Knight - Poem by Knight Fizzstorm

Placing her pure kerchief upon my breast
beneath orange shields gold raised falcon crest,
sol's emblazoned heat inflames shaking steel
lance gripped steady by armored hand linked mail.

Auric Hues restless, sidewinding footing,  
alert, neighing, proud backed, front legs hoofing 
sandy dirt, visor lowered, slitted light,
peripheral vision vanishing sight.

Suffocating aloneness fear driven,
battle call to challenge duly given
spurring his proud frame beneath my iron worn
he galloped hard toward adversities form.

Lance slightly raised over dividing gate
charging madly toward infinities state
fettered heart pounding gold falcon flying 
crashing hoofs press forward voice crying;

'Boon to my heart, protect me in this joust,
honor and glory to my father's house.'
Flowered fields appeared in the tumbling light
reflecting off the toppling Jaded Knight.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This message was received by the beautiful Lady Endomorph.

Lady Endomorph is most pleased that she has entertained Knight Fizzstorm and wishes him most luck and endurance in tomorrows contest, she would offer her tissue for him to champion but regrettably she blew her nose pon it earlier.....So she will just watch but twill be silently cheering for his safe return...Please forward Clavicus......Lady Endomorph.

I regrettably forgot to inform Knight Fizzstorm that I substituted a kerchief for the soiled pon tissue. The old knights eyesight is poor and his hands were gloved.
Notwithstanding the slight deceit this is the first joust he has ever won!
We thank and honor the beautiful Lady Endomorph. (not her real name but it will
be duly recorded if the dear lady so desires.)

Clavicus

Comments about Jaded Knight by Knight Fizzstorm

  • Unwritten Soul (9/1/2012 2:07:00 AM)


    The knight must be tinted with smile while writing this, upon your face i am sure there is a glitter of murmuring love..and the notes below the poem were so humor, lovely and enjoyable...thanks for sharing a piece of poem from castle of crimson sand country_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

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  • (8/28/2012 2:15:00 PM)


    Endomorph indeed....m'Lady will not be pleased when she hears this dear Knight! More snot rags may follow! ! (Report) Reply

  • (8/27/2012 12:33:00 PM)


    Breathtaking, your poetry reflecting clearly what the lady dust see, a flailing light of chivalry.....Twas a beauteous sight, dear knight :) tyvm (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilson (8/26/2012 1:48:00 AM)


    Wow, this Knight is not jaded in any way or form, a brilliant write, loved it, - such interesting notes also. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 25, 2012



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