Jahan's Special Place Poem by Stevie Taite

Jahan's Special Place

Rating: 5.0


The water splashes round you
You balance on your heal
A half a smile upon your face
How does the water feel?

Your clothes are cream and comfortable
Your form blends with the spray
I see your hem is dampened
Will it dry soon on this day?

You shared with us your river
And the memories it finds
Your prose made waters flow right through
The image in my mind.


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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
For my friend! Written about a photo put on facebook, taken of him in the shalllows of the river of his inspired poem.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alla Simone 03 December 2012

You took us directly to Jahan's special place. Excellent imagery is so easily rolled out here. A pleasure to read. This piece is simply beautiful.

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Poetheart Morgan 26 November 2012

you defined our friend as waters of its river. He is water and forest too.Love this friend! ! Stevie Beautiful tribute!

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Jahan Zeb 22 November 2012

well written. You are something. A good poet and a loving and kind friend. Very Good write Stevie

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