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Jealousy Leads To Attacking.

Rating: 4.0

The poetry I know is not made for attacking
people jealous of others 'cause there truly slacking
the content infront just keeps on lacking
to much jealousy will send you packing

but
why hate on others, (just concentrate on yourself)
fix up your content... don`t ruin your health
attacking, will just leave you a name
if you get hated on... you got yourself to blame! .

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ian Bowen 14 December 2007

Found this to be a good piece of work, for one so young.

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Effie Yalena Steyn 12 December 2007

Surprisingly mature (in a good way! !) Well done. Effie x

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Thad Wilk 11 December 2007

Nice write Rick! ! *10*!

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