Monday, October 31, 2022

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Rating: 5.0

Sometimes I'd watch him watching me
As I was swinging on a rope
O'er the river from the elm tree.
Each time we met I knew he'd hope
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Ima Ryma
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Sandra Feldman 31 October 2022

But with great flow and poetic appeal. Stays with you.

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Sandra Feldman 31 October 2022

Sad semi-love story. V

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 31 October 2022

I was hoping on a happier ending, but over all Ima this is brilliant Bravo! ! Kudos

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Simple poetic statement of silent love and loss. Beautiful

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