Journey Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Journey

Rating: 5.0

Walking down an old dirt
road, don't really know where it
goes. Fields all around, skies so
gold. Broken pocket watch,
sentimental, hung around my
neck to hold...

Journey
Sunday, April 13, 2025
Topic(s) of this poem: time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rob Lamberton 19 April 2025

Life is like an old dirt road!

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Rob Lamberton 19 April 2025

We often try to recreate moments in our life. The times and the seasons sometimes help us!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 April 2025

Beautifully expressed with superb imagery as always, Becca. Top Marks and.to my favorites.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 April 2025

A true and vivid depiction of a life's journey. Many of us could relate to this unpredictable journey. Fields all around, skies so gold resonate with me.

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Rob Lamberton 19 April 2025

The more I read this poem, the more I like it! !

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Rob Lamberton 19 April 2025

A very clever poem, makes me consider life's golden sunsets. **********

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Rob Lamberton 19 April 2025

It's good to cleave to the gold in life!

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Rob Lamberton 19 April 2025

When we are broken it's easy to loose track of time!

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Rob Lamberton 19 April 2025

Who knows what might be harvested from the fields.

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