Joy In Birth Beautiful Rainbows Ribbon Hues Poem by Terence George Craddock

Joy In Birth Beautiful Rainbows Ribbon Hues



joy found in rain showers in rain drops
joy found in sun showers between showers
joy in birth beautiful rainbows ribbon hues

Thursday, October 15, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: joy,rain,rain drops,rainbow
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Copyright © Terence George Craddock
Written in October 2020 on the 11.10.2020.
Inspired by the poem 'Musical Drips' by the poet Paul Brookes.
Dedicated to the poet Paul Brookes.
Split image from the poem 'Rain A Joy For All Loving Water' by the poet Terence George Craddock.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 16 October 2020

I wonder how much children in cities miss not seeing wild ducks feeding on wet days, or in not playing in water, on the way to school because they are always driven in cars. Sometimes especially in hot summer or warmer spring and autumn. playing in the rain can be a time of joy. How much are a cell phone generation missing?

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Terry Craddock 16 October 2020

I have a feeling this comment was meant as a poetic reply for 'Rain A Joy For All Loving Water' and 'Wet Days Worms Grubs Flooded Out Happy Duck Eaten' because this is the version that mentions ducks. Sometimes poems birth responses in poems. This is part of what poems are meant to be.

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Paul Brookes 16 October 2020

Puddles sodden morning a day for ducks wetted roots life for plants such joy found in rain showers, rain drops, puddle reflections sun between showers, birth of rainbows transient.

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