Just A Teardrop Poem by Khairul Ahsan

Just A Teardrop

Rating: 5.0


Just a drop of tear,
Appears to be a fathomless ocean
If it hangs from a mournful eye
Of someone special,
In deep pain
Perceptible only to special eyes.

Poetry, dreams and reflections
Appear on that teardrop.
The songs of a flowing fountain
Resembling the poundings of a sobbing heart
Are sung in silence,
And a history, writ large on just a drop of tear!


Picture Credit: Google

Dhaka
06 October 2017
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Just A Teardrop
Friday, October 13, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life,sadness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A teardrop may have more depth than an ocean. Sometimes, it may disappear before it falls. Sometimes it may fall on the hardest of granites and dissolve it in no time!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 19 October 2017

Such a heartwarming poem, Khairul.... congrats for being chosen....a huge 10+++++

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Khairul Ahsan 19 October 2017

@Bernard F. Asuncion, Thanks for your comment and generous rating. I have read your poem 'Chosen One'. Was yesterday your birthday? If so, belated happy birthday!

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Elena Sandu 19 October 2017

Thank you dear poet! You brought plenty of thoughts to ponder on, I shall try to be more mindful of the powers of just a tear drop. Wonderfully expressed, am very grateful to read such beautiful art, it seems to bring showers of awareness to my soul. ~Sweet Poetry ~ ❣

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Khairul Ahsan 28 October 2017

@Elena Sandu, Thank you so much for your flowery appreciation, its fragrance will keep me going with my humble efforts at writing poetry for a long time to come. Read your poem, 'Princess' and loved it.

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Bharati Nayak 19 October 2017

Poetry, dreams and memories Appear on that teardrop. The songs of a flowing fountain Resembling the poundings of a sobbing heart Are sung in silence, And a history, writ large on just a drop of tear! - - - - - - - - -Songs of a flowing mountain ! ! ! ! ! What a stunning imagery as it captures the sea of emotions in few words.A tear drop in the eye of the beloved speaks thousand words in silence- - -A wonderful write, thanks for sharing.Congratulations for being selected as Poet of the Day.

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Nabakishore Dash 12 April 2022

what a brilliant expression! ! 10 stars revered poet.

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Khairul Ahsan 29 July 2020

Thank you, @Mahtab Bangalee, for your inspiring comments on my poem and its generous rating.

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Khairul Ahsan 29 July 2020

Thank you, @Howard The Motivational Poet Simon, for your magnanimous comment you left on my poem. I am greatly inspired by your kind words.

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Khairul Ahsan 24 July 2020

@Elena Plotkin, Thank you so much! Your appreciation means so much to me!

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Khairul Ahsan 16 July 2020

Thank you @Susan Williams for your kind appreciation of my poem. The honor of your thoughtful recognition weighs heavier to me than the poem's selection as MPOD.

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