Marilyn Lott

Gold Star - 8,309 Points (5-28-42 / Washington state USA)

Just As I Am - Poem by Marilyn Lott

As the sun set in the night time
And the day was finally through
Before laying down his weary head
He had one more thing to do

He dropped down on his knees
Put his forehead against the bed
Spoke directly to his God
And this is what he said

“Oh Lord I’ve been a sinner
Off and on throughout my life
Not always been so loving
To my sweet and caring wife

I’ve not always thought about
The neighbors down the road
For I’ve spent too much time
Toting my own heavy load”

He shifted his tired weight
Feeling uncomfortable right now
Harder it seemed to do than
Getting a horse to pull the plow

“I’ve made so many mistakes
In raising my five kids
Not always said I love them
My emotions are often hid

No matter what I’ve done, Lord
Through all my trials and sins
Please try to understand
And accept me just as I am”

Somehow this good man knew
God would hear his plea
And help him face another day
Just like with you and me!


Comments about Just As I Am by Marilyn Lott

  • Ann Beard (3/31/2008 4:23:00 PM)


    Excellent poem Marilyn. No one is perfect thats for sure but a good man will try to put it right. Kind regards Ann. (Report) Reply

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  • C.R. Clark (3/30/2008 11:00:00 PM)


    Great poem, Marilyn. Isn't it wonderful that God is always there for those who seek him. Thanks for sharing....10...
    Richard
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  • (3/30/2008 9:25:00 PM)


    A wonderfully beautiful poem Marilyn! ! Very expressive and capturing! ! *10plus*
    Friend Thad
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 30, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, October 23, 2011


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