Fay Slimm

Rookie - 102 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Just Beyond - Poem by Fay Slimm

Everything has a beyondness.
Happenings end, and after 'now'
Is a world of it's own, - wonder,
Outside the present time endows
A deep and additional side
To the finest poetic flights
Fancy can conjour, - a place beside
The normal, mundane, and just right.

Yes measuring 'yonder' is deep,
But not out of reach and worth keeping.

Comments about Just Beyond by Fay Slimm

  • Sandra Martyres (9/27/2009 3:31:00 PM)

    Just Beyond is indeed a very imagianative piece....Good write as usual Fay.10 (Report) Reply

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  • (9/24/2009 1:48:00 PM)

    A fine flight of poetic fancy. (Report) Reply

  • Tom Balch (9/24/2009 1:43:00 PM)

    Perfect title for a perfect piece Fay,10+++ regards Tom (Report) Reply

  • (9/24/2009 1:38:00 PM)

    That place where inspiration breeds
    just enough to fulfill our needs
    teasing, taunting, pleasing thought
    we dabble, with that, we were not taught
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 24, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, October 18, 2009

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