Andrei Burca

Just You

Your gaze, can wound my soul..
Your touch, can light my world..
Your words, can make me sad..
Your smile, can blind the sun..

The truth, can hurt my ears..
A lie, can bring me tears..
But you, can never kill me!
For I, am a Superman!

(May 5'th 09)

Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 25, 2010
Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 30, 2010

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  • Elena SanduElena Sandu (3/29/2010 6:10:00 PM)

    This pain is so real that it I thought I got it too..lucky with the last line, gave the smiles of hope..keep writing we want to see more of you! ! Already gave you the first 10 ..wish I could give you ten times more!

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  • Trade MartinTrade Martin (3/26/2010 10:20:00 AM)

    Very cute poem my friend. Now you do realize that if you are Superman, you're from another planet (Krypton) and the only thing that can weaken you is Kryptonite. So don't worry, because I don't believe anyone has the toxic element. Regards, Trade.

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  • Seema Chowdhury (3/25/2010 2:22:00 PM)

    Hi Andrei, welcome to poem hunter.
    its a nice poem, simple and short but feelings are conveyed truly.
    hope you will send more poems soon.
    read some of my new poems of 2010 on pg1.
    take care

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  • Sarwar ChowdhurySarwar Chowdhury (3/25/2010 1:54:00 PM)

    fine thoughts fine wording!

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/25/2010 8:14:00 AM)

    The truth, can hurt my ears..
    A lie, can bring me tears..
    But you, can never kill me........i msut sayyou are realisic.. your words are simple to rad and arealize.. wrie more n more.......10

    readine.. i miss////// miss i miss you

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  • Joyce Hemsley (3/25/2010 7:50:00 AM)

    Very easy to read - very unusual - very GOOD indeed. Joyce Hemsley

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  • Aldo Kraas (3/25/2010 6:51:00 AM)

    This poem is very Good.

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