Saturday, August 8, 2009

Justice... Comments

Rating: 4.6

We can never create a single life,
So we shouldn't have right to take it,
But what is going on all around a society,
Some psychotic man have been serial killer,
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kafil uddin raihan.
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Doha Ewiess 14 August 2009

i liked the poem...and i liked the last line so much...well done :)

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Emily Core 11 August 2009

ya thats so true good job

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 10 August 2009

Yap sir Bob, You are right, But my view is about the social negligence to grow up a man, No one is a born killer or murderer, We must suppress the social reasons that lead a man to a murder, Besides that we should make a change in our judicial systems too.All these combined tasks would reduce the moral disorientation of us and then we would judge a man properly as a murderer.Thanks sir for your valuable comment to share with us.

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Bob Gibson 10 August 2009

What say you about the murderer, who may have killed your wife what should be done to him, , free to take a life! how many lives is he allowed to take, ? before his time has come for protection of the species' this man must be hung food for thought Kafil

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Marieta Maglas 09 August 2009

nice rational poem, well penned with deep thoughts...........10+

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dr veenaa rai 08 August 2009

kill the crime, not the criminal...a good thought...

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Lynn Glover 08 August 2009

Kafil: You write very well and leave most people wondering about a life for a life. God said to obey the law of the land, and when we don't we must be punished by the law of the land. Only God knows why we do these acts against each other. But over all a good write. Keep up the good work. Lynn

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Carol Gall 08 August 2009

great write but im on the fence about that

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Christina Phan 08 August 2009

Fanastic job 10+++ kept it up Great thought and its all true

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Ted M 08 August 2009

It's a very tricky question. Man in his unquenchable thirst for more always is up with something. It's an eye-opener. Why do people do what they do? There must be a logical reason somewhere.

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Nizamettin Esen Haymanali 08 August 2009

Justice is an enigmatic question of humanity. A beautiful poem well penned.10.

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Brandon Nothing 08 August 2009

Which allows to take a life empowering a badge? - I really like that line, although your poem was a little straightforward it gets the message across ^^

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