Dave Alan Walker

Gold Star - 4,807 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Justice Of The External Mind - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Slaves to the powers
of the external mind
If your innocent or guilty
they do not mind

Watching and waiting
to make their strike
They'll take you down
and watch you drown

As long as they get somebody
to make themselves proud
They won't care
that your mind is not all there

All over the world
The powers of the external mind
is watching you


Comments about Justice Of The External Mind by Dave Alan Walker

  • (12/30/2011 6:12:00 PM)


    Wonderful! You got me thinking now. (Report) Reply

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  • Vipins Puthooran (12/13/2011 2:31:00 PM)


    [But we cannot read other people mind]
    A g'd write! ! ! 10+++
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  • (12/11/2011 11:34:00 AM)


    Have your own stand then no mind can over power you i.e. realizing your own potential. Great write. (Report) Reply

  • (12/10/2011 11:22:00 AM)


    we have to make ourselves wake up,
    from all the illusions we dream on
    which r good for nothing
    so that it might help us from the justice of external mind.
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  • Unwritten Soul (12/10/2011 6:34:00 AM)


    A pinch of reality...it's enough for this recipe to get flavor in life poetry.. you teach me again to beware with around and people's mind..Nice reminder, thanks for this advice Dave_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 10, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 10, 2011


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