Slaves to the powers
of the external mind
If your innocent or guilty
they do not mind
Watching and waiting
to make their strike
They'll take you down
and watch you drown
As long as they get somebody
to make themselves proud
They won't care
that your mind is not all there
All over the world
The powers of the external mind
is watching you
[But we cannot read other people mind] A g'd write! ! ! 10+++
Have your own stand then no mind can over power you i.e. realizing your own potential. Great write.
we have to make ourselves wake up, from all the illusions we dream on which r good for nothing so that it might help us from the justice of external mind.
A pinch of reality...it's enough for this recipe to get flavor in life poetry.. you teach me again to beware with around and people's mind..Nice reminder, thanks for this advice Dave_Unwritten Soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wonderful! You got me thinking now.