Keen Interest To Be Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Keen Interest To Be
Keen interest to be
Sunday,9th August 2020
An Imperfection
it is not at all a sin
it is visible and noticed even
he always stands as crestfallen
but beware of one thing
always try to bring
some improvement
and show the betterment
no one is perfect
so don't overreact
it is a fact
and shall remain so in our acts
on whom to bank upon?
and keen interest to be shown
it is the quality of a good person
that he is not satisfied with his excused reasons
fall and rise again
but never let the pain take over
you need the support and shelter
so get it from anywhere
you shall never become perfect
or claim in your acts
it is self-drive
that makes you survive often
De, Jadia Hasmukh
Date & Time: 8/8/2020 9: 26: 00 PM Remove this comment Poem: 58935064 - Keen Interest To Be Member: Varsha M Comment: A very wise and beautiful composition Sir. Very well written and expressed.
Imperfection should be transformed into perfection by practice with positive morals. Keen interest is needed always. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned.
True true Doc. We strive to do better till we die. I was studying Bruce Lees Jeet Kune Doo in my youth and one critical philosophy i took away was that when you become a master you must set aside all that people laud you for and start from zero. When you think you know that is the time to say i dont know but my experience is this and that. The beginning and the end is the same. The way without a way. So said Master Lee. Good peom with solid advice
Apologies for the N word in me earlier. Its because i cant insult myself thats why i use it loosely but of course there are some who are offended. I bow in shame.
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Lovely lines... it is self-drive that makes you survive often An apt and sound advice and a beautiful message coneyed! Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India, Aug 09,2020
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A very wise and beautiful composition Sir. Very well written and expressed.