Keep Faith Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Keep Faith

Rating: 5.0


Come along
Even if you are wrong
I can take you to safety
As desired by an almighty

I can be your savior
True one with honor
You will know
And cheerfully blow

No need to hide
As opinion may divide
But you as precious as black stone
As dear as pearl and diamond

You will not run
But make fun
With joy and happiness
That shall shine your face

I shall take you
Out of dark to prove true
That you have wisdom
That is held seldom by anyone

Keep faith and love
Firmly hold hand and believe
I shall take you to shore
With everything on boat and anchor

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Nice Samuel Chen58 minutes ago But I feel that the rhymes, especially the initial ones, feel somewhat forced. I think the poem would be stronger without rhyme and a clearer message. Comment +1

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use your words not mine Lilly Emery58 minutes ago :)

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Het Patel and Alpa Suba like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome Just now · Unlike · 1

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Come along Even if you are wrong

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Come along Even if you are wrong

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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