Keep On Raising Rate Of Beats Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

Keep On Raising Rate Of Beats

Rating: 2.9


Keep on raising rate of beats

then the raising keep slow,

broken hearts i treat.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rakesh Bedi 02 July 2009

.... broken hearts I treat; nice! Both the activities belong to love n only love!

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Shashendra Amalshan 28 June 2009

hello ma'am.. your words are great nourishment for the, sore, wounded, shattered hearts indeed.. thanks for providing us with such pieces..10++ with lots of love shan

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 June 2009

Amazing piece

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Afzal Shauq 25 June 2009

Keep on raising rate of beats then the raising keep slow, broken hearts i treat. what a sweet haiko written in japanese way... very inspiring and heart felt..I think this is one of your best poems and I am inspired of its idea and the way you done perfectly..I suggest for you to continue the same way..and your work and ideas will be unbeatable..and readers will like..as I liked it very much..well done friend for sweet poem..10+++++++++++++++++

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The Dreamer 24 June 2009

broken hearts i treat. I like these words always better to treat than create - Thank you

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 10 March 2010

Sure poets are true healer …… twee… buoy … wonderful enjoyed Ms. Nivedita UK PS 10+

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~ Jon London ~ 26 July 2009

Words that echoes the pattern of life back into the heart...nicely done Tamara

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Saadat Tahir 16 July 2009

Where shepherds once were hous'd in homely sheds, Now tow'rs within the clouds advance their heads. writing credit...where due! The Aeneid, by Virgil

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Afzal Shauq 12 July 2009

I again and again say that tamara dear is a good poetess with realistic approach and her pasion is to promote quality and sense of competetion...appreciate her.10/10

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rago rago 06 July 2009

let it beat at rhythm and the rhythm keep on raising............

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