A Thunder's Sighing Tone Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

A Thunder's Sighing Tone

Rating: 4.4

your heart beats shaped in a sorrowful poem..

filled by the heat of a hot ZONE, ..

the loneliness of a dawn..

the words apologize for it's paralysis..

while it has a thunder's sighing feeling tone

the silence speak in presence of the beauty kingdom.....

Antonio Liao 15 June 2009

my whole life wish to attain the reflective poem you share....a passionate hunger of a thirsting essence of reality.....a real self embroider in the aroma of a real person....very beautiful a self contain wisdom of time....thank you for sharing....a 10+++++++

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Antonio Liao 20 June 2009

A real poet pushes a while and read....just a little pep...then your poem ignite us to read and write more beautiful poem...so Beautiful indeed...a 10+

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~ Jon London ~ 19 June 2009

A very wise piece Tamara, Silence can say so much without actually speaking...lovely work my friend....keep penning

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 19 June 2009

a wise composition. the heading intriguing. shan

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rago rago 18 June 2009

silence always speak many things........

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Seema Gupta 26 September 2009

' beautiful to read....heart of the hot zone...amezing..' regards

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Bob Blackwell 02 August 2009

An interesting and intriguing write, reads quite beautifully, I have experienced the beauty of a desert dawn, the cool before the raging heat, it gives a silence which reflects and gi ves a peace so filled with beauty of the moment.

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Mubeen Sadhika 31 July 2009

Astonishing. Fabulous. Remarakable. Stunning. Amazing. Terrific. Splendid.

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R. Manoj Mohan 24 July 2009

The last line makes one mystified.....Well done.

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Ted M 22 July 2009

Nice comparisons here

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