your heart beats shaped in a sorrowful poem..
filled by the heat of a hot ZONE, ..
the loneliness of a dawn..
the words apologize for it's paralysis..
while it has a thunder's sighing feeling tone
the silence speak in presence of the beauty kingdom.....
A real poet pushes a while and read....just a little pep...then your poem ignite us to read and write more beautiful poem...so Beautiful indeed...a 10+
A very wise piece Tamara, Silence can say so much without actually speaking...lovely work my friend....keep penning
' beautiful to read....heart of the hot zone...amezing..' regards
An interesting and intriguing write, reads quite beautifully, I have experienced the beauty of a desert dawn, the cool before the raging heat, it gives a silence which reflects and gi ves a peace so filled with beauty of the moment.
Astonishing. Fabulous. Remarakable. Stunning. Amazing. Terrific. Splendid.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
my whole life wish to attain the reflective poem you share....a passionate hunger of a thirsting essence of reality.....a real self embroider in the aroma of a real person....very beautiful a self contain wisdom of time....thank you for sharing....a 10+++++++