A Thunder's Sighing Tone Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

A Thunder's Sighing Tone

Rating: 4.4

your heart beats shaped in a sorrowful poem..

filled by the heat of a hot ZONE, ..

the loneliness of a dawn..

the words apologize for it's paralysis..

while it has a thunder's sighing feeling tone

the silence speak in presence of the beauty kingdom.....

Antonio Liao 20 June 2009

A real poet pushes a while and read....just a little pep...then your poem ignite us to read and write more beautiful poem...so Beautiful indeed...a 10+

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Antonio Liao 15 June 2009

my whole life wish to attain the reflective poem you share....a passionate hunger of a thirsting essence of reality.....a real self embroider in the aroma of a real person....very beautiful a self contain wisdom of time....thank you for sharing....a 10+++++++

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awesome just awesome Tamara

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Afzal Shauq 15 June 2009

i read this poem today maybe 4 times and enjoyed a lot.....10+++++++++++++++++

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Ying Escalona 15 June 2009

let it go beating forever...because when it stop...the sorrow will be very intense :) looks like i'm getting more literal Tam....nice work

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Seema Gupta 26 September 2009

' beautiful to read....heart of the hot zone...amezing..' regards

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Bob Blackwell 02 August 2009

An interesting and intriguing write, reads quite beautifully, I have experienced the beauty of a desert dawn, the cool before the raging heat, it gives a silence which reflects and gi ves a peace so filled with beauty of the moment.

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Mubeen Sadhika 31 July 2009

Astonishing. Fabulous. Remarakable. Stunning. Amazing. Terrific. Splendid.

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R. Manoj Mohan 24 July 2009

The last line makes one mystified.....Well done.

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Ted M 22 July 2009

Nice comparisons here

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