TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .


Ride The Rays And Come To Me..The Melody - Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

The melody, you and me

say it again and let it rain
LOVE TO ME,

In the castle, above the sea,
waiting the blue..
waiting the white,
waiting the boat,

TO THE WIND SCREAMING
you to float,
to climb the castle
to kill ogre,

behind the gate, your soul mate
about to vanish to suffocate

where is the great? where is the key?

it is with the saint confess to me,

why to hesitate?

it is your fate being me,

on my tears stop to skate.

so much hunger, so much thirst,
for the taste,
why to waste our moments, ?
open the ways toward me
.................
Iam the chaste, for you the nights
I maintain, for you remain,

congested heart, , blocking the vein,

THE SOUL IN PAIN, reduce the strain
and live in me,

obtain the days, the sorrow contain,

ride the rays and come to me
the heart..you gain,

it is the fate, you are the soul
she is the mate,

she can't bear your princess,
you are the peer,
come to her with her share
all your fear

no one can
rate more than her,

break the chain, both flare,

her place above
flower, above tree,

soar with her,
she is the bee,

come on date,
why to wait?

where is the great?
find the key

very far throw, deep in oceans,
deep in sea,

THE MELODY you AND she

she is yours, you are hers,

TOGETHER YOU..
A MELODY


Comments about Ride The Rays And Come To Me..The Melody by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

  • Akram SaqibAkram Saqib (7/2/2017 1:20:00 AM)

    nicely written poem expressing desire to meet the mate (Report)Reply

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  • Souren MondalSouren Mondal (11/18/2015 5:28:00 AM)

    A well written poem about love and expression of love.. Thanks for sharing.. (Report)Reply

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  • Prince Obed de la CruzPrince Obed de la Cruz (6/10/2010 11:09:00 AM)

    poetic indeed... deserving to be in the top 500... no flaws... no errors.. yup the best! (Report)Reply

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  • Hadeer Ahmed (6/7/2010 5:46:00 PM)

    very nice really :) keep it up... i like ur style (Report)Reply

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  • Ken E Hall (12/8/2009 4:25:00 AM)

    Just a corker of a poem...a cork holding in champange of words
    a melody of bubbles with love ++++10
    regards
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  • Rafique Farooqi (11/24/2009 5:50:00 AM)

    The melody, you and me

    say it again and let it rain
    LOVE TO ME,

    In the castle, above the sea,
    waiting the blue..
    waiting the white,
    waiting the boat,

    IT IS VERY TOUCHING POEM, AND AMAZING WRITE
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  • Meggie GultianoMeggie Gultiano (11/9/2009 6:43:00 AM)

    So beautiful..Very romantic piece..Love it soooomuch, Tamara

    Love♥ ♥ ♥
    Meggie
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  • Rachel Ann Butler (11/8/2009 3:49:00 AM)

    'Ride the rays and come to me
    the heart, you gain'

    Rachel Ann Butler
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  • Patrick A. Martin (10/16/2009 7:26:00 AM)

    This is a marvalous poem Tamara and coming from me that is saying something as I usally avoid LOVE POEMS like the plague.--10 (Report)Reply

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  • Joe Rosochacki (10/15/2009 5:05:00 PM)

    Great visualizations. How true the premise. (Report)Reply

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  • Elsee Daniel (10/14/2009 12:53:00 PM)

    beautifull love poem......well done 10+ (Report)Reply

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  • Obinna Eruchie (10/13/2009 1:42:00 PM)

    Words passionate as flames of fire are expressed beautifully. (Report)Reply

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  • Disturbed angel in a straight jacket (10/1/2009 10:23:00 AM)

    your passion for another is like fire :) good poem (Report)Reply

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  • Philosophy of a DewyFlower (9/9/2009 11:38:00 AM)

    WOW TaMaRa!

    what a beautiful poem! so romantic! the flow of words makes it so so sweet!
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  • Dream Catcher (9/9/2009 9:29:00 AM)

    The poem is like a dream......
    the way you write is beautiful, unique.
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  • John KnightJohn Knight (8/29/2009 5:46:00 AM)

    Tamara - this poem is real challenge to the heart and to the mind! In its form, in its language, in its rhyme - it is raw, dymnamic and straight from the heart.
    The TRIPLETS give it a driving rhythm:

    waiting the blue - waiting the white - waiting the boat
    you to float - to climb the castle - to kill the ogre
    the soul in pain - reduce the strain - and live in me
    it is the fate - you are the soul - she is the mate

    The SEPARATED LINES (MONOLINES) slow you down and make us consider your emotive questions:

    why to hesitate?
    it is your fate being me
    on my tears stop to skate (a very powerful monoline)

    At the end you treat us to a series of 'rhyme linked doublets rising to a fulfilment and a sensual climax:

    her place above - flower above tree
    soar with her - she is the bee
    come on date - why wait
    where is the great - find key

    The invitation is followed by the consumation:

    The MELODY you AND me
    she os yours - you are hers
    TOGETHER YOU............. A MELODY!

    Initially separated and then COMING TOGETHER in a beautiful climax.
    A true love poem - so emotionally expressed - 10 all the way!
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  • Jen Capaldi (8/28/2009 1:40:00 PM)

    very imaginative.well written and romantic. almost like a fairy tale made into poetry. i enjoyed it very much. i look forward to having time to read your other work.
    jen
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  • Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (8/28/2009 6:20:00 AM)

    Romantic and highly original Tamara. As everyone else has mentioned there is great imagery
    in it too! Well done. 10 love Karin
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  • warner treuter (8/24/2009 5:17:00 PM)

    Hot stuff, no doubt about it! (Report)Reply

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  • Rafique Farooqi (8/24/2009 12:29:00 AM)

    Very beautiful and rare poem (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 1, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 24, 2011


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