TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

In His Heart A Golden Chair - Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

(A great one while calling his barroness by these names...)

It was a scent...BUT not just any, ...
her scent filled the air
see breeze,
It was jasmine of lady faire

his contessa in the wind...singing him
.dancing love, and the feet dancing bare,

on the sound of his laughter, with the joy of her hair,
lady fire always hope, lady fire who would dare,

first of year was so long, and the night was so young.
....then arrived lady faire,

loving temptress, loving him...
her prince waiting there

summer eve never leave
the magic carpet....tinker belle who would weave
, tinker belle who would care,

lady fire who would water
the waiting soul, and your life she shall share
limitless love, limitless mare, charming knight...to her declare.,
charming knight, limitless mare..limitless love both declare

flying eagle and a raven may be odd, but united pair
their wings are bride, above the known seeking the rare

my lady doth sleep,
deeply sleep in heart of chair

as the magic calling her

little one...very deep, deeply sleep in my heart
....in my heart a golden chair

Comments about In His Heart A Golden Chair by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

  • Jester's P (10/16/2009 10:42:00 PM)

    my lady doth sleep,
    deeply sleep in heart of chair

    as the magic calling her

    little one...very deep, deeply sleep in my heart
    ....in my heart a golden chair

    ….in this lines something reminded me of my favorite fairy tales…and it was lovely.
    However, there are incantations in it- the charm of death/ ignorance (deep sleep): the spell of malicious/ deceitful state of ‘being’ (golden chair) .

    Anyhow it was just my interpretation of the imagery mentioned above.

    But all of it beautiful poem.
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  • (10/16/2009 5:03:00 PM)

    Sista this one is sublime! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I loved it! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Mark Nwagwu (10/16/2009 4:20:00 AM)

    TaMaRa, please, please, write this way always, so pure, so moving, so refreshing, so.., so.., so enchanting. Beautiful, stirs the soul, captures the spirit of what life's all about. My 10 here given
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  • Spiritwind Wood (10/14/2009 9:22:00 PM)

    intresting..very well written..it was good-10 (Report) Reply

  • (9/20/2009 1:01:00 AM)

    awesome a perfect ten my unknown friend...with love and care...with a pitch of sadness..may you keep creating such beauty again and again for years to come...
    with best wishes
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  • (9/17/2009 11:22:00 AM)

    i like it, it pretty good,10++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • (9/13/2009 7:32:00 AM)

    a good piece with interesting logic and heart feeling meaningful idea.. liked it 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • (9/12/2009 11:25:00 PM)

    Swings and sings. A lot like Camelot. (Report) Reply

  • (9/10/2009 10:10:00 PM)

    This was pleasant with a sing-song quality about it. Very different. thanks (Report) Reply

  • (8/28/2009 2:30:00 PM)

    Very nice write indeed. I remember the feelings well keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • (8/28/2009 4:35:00 AM)

    From : Charles Wiles (Best Love Poems) (Guildford United Kingdom; Male; 39)
    To : TaMaRa HaNaRinG ******SeeKinG JuStiCe AnD P
    Date Time : 8/27/2009 7: 06: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)

    Subject : Re:

    It's a nice poem... i like the smell of jasmine and sea breezes...
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  • (8/24/2009 4:37:00 PM)

    very wonderful writing. keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • (8/24/2009 12:37:00 PM)

    this is a wonderful and lovely poem...10+ (Report) Reply

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (8/21/2009 10:44:00 AM)

    night when so young in its limitless florescence
    grace of beauty yet waits to embrace luscious glow
    dancing over the lips of thirst of to be emblazoned..................most fascinating story of love, ingeniously curved over the cravings of heart by resilience,10++++++, thanks for sharing
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  • (8/21/2009 9:25:00 AM)

    Those are the Golden nuggets from the abode of the soul and with one flight the suitor finds solace in the arms of the sweet love.Sweetly and carefully written poem. (Report) Reply

  • (8/21/2009 4:25:00 AM)

    A time comes along when a poem has that something special and boy has this got that, this is the best you have wrote to date Light and shade, story line, clever plot no need to write what you have said.weeeeeeell done++++++++100
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  • Louis Rams (8/20/2009 8:28:00 PM)

    i see this poem in two different lights.
    one is a knight in shining armour, saving the lovely damsel.
    then the end of the poem - i see a father with his child in a rocking chair carrying the child to far away places.
    either way, it is a beautiful write and touching.

    A TEN
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  • (8/20/2009 1:28:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem like a fascinating arab night while flying on a magic carpet.10 (Report) Reply

  • (8/20/2009 8:38:00 AM)

    well done, madam! I'm glad I read this. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (8/19/2009 5:32:00 PM)

    fasinating poem you have here, very creative, nice job (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 12, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 14, 2011

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