Monday, April 13, 2015

Keep On Running Comments

Rating: 4.8

Running, smiling, laughing
Always
The two of us
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Lyn Paul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 June 2015

For it is all about believing No longer running Too many buried But we are still smiling, still laughing.........Though we have to fetch many more difficulties still we have to smile and laugh. Groovy imagination. Enjoyed. Thanks.

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Rajesh Thankappan 26 April 2015

Bonding is the structure that like atoms give a shape to MATTER. If we share a happy bonding with a person we love, life seems so much light and pleasanter. Loved it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 April 2015

Nice way along the road; with the muse of poetry.

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Musa Gift Masombuka 17 April 2015

Incredible!! This is more like a love-journey or should I say life -journey? It suits them both. This is a wonderful piece. Big ups for that. Me, seeing this piece I feel that poetry is alive.

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Geetha Jayakumar 17 April 2015

A Beautiful poem Lyn. Feeling blessed is most important. Life is never greener from any side, its the people's thoughts make it greener. Very true said, its all about believing... For it is all about believing No longer running Too many buried But we are still smiling, still laughing We have to walk many more miles, still smiling and laughing. That's the life. As usual, positive flow of words, really make this poem beautiful. Loved reading it.

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