This is brilliance! The rhyme gives this verse a nursery rhyme quality. That makes the text even more unsettling, perhaps even terrifying. Such dark places Kerouac did visit, if not inhabit. Brilliant!
M.J., your continued support and encouragement via your very positive constructive criticism continually inspires and motivates me! I am forever grateful!
The unsettling, and terrifying, places that His Shadow inhabited makes for fascinating reading and mysterious writing! It's no wonder that I'm so immersed in the production of The Kerouac Venture! A world of THX to you for that, my friend! ! !
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This is brilliance! The rhyme gives this verse a nursery rhyme quality. That makes the text even more unsettling, perhaps even terrifying. Such dark places Kerouac did visit, if not inhabit. Brilliant!
M.J., your continued support and encouragement via your very positive constructive criticism continually inspires and motivates me! I am forever grateful!
The unsettling, and terrifying, places that His Shadow inhabited makes for fascinating reading and mysterious writing! It's no wonder that I'm so immersed in the production of The Kerouac Venture! A world of THX to you for that, my friend! ! !