Key West Madonna Poem by Barry Middleton

Key West Madonna

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The girl in blue upon the sand
intrigues me like this southern land.
She always smiles as if to say
that I could speak but words betray.

She watches casually her child
and notices my sometimes smile,
then turns to check and be assured
to find her view is not obscured
but playing idly on the sand,
a tiny shell held tight in hand.

I watched her from the farther side
struck dumb before the southern tide
and might have spoke only to say
that she was beautiful today.

But to the sea, beneath the foam,
I nourished other thoughts of home,
a longing to be small and free;
the tide lets go and leaves me be.

Key West Madonna
Sunday, March 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,florida,introspection
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written in 1975.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Norah Tunney 20 March 2016

Beautiful poem! ! She always smiles as if to say that I could speak But words betray Ah! ! A longing to be small and Free the tide lets go and let's me be So appreciative for this poem It's the space between the words that says it all

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Barry Middleton 20 March 2016

Thank you again. Glad you liked it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 March 2016

Wow...wonderful to have a read of 1975 poem that is written long back. Longing to be small and free expresses wise humor and this is entirely fantastic sharing really.10

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Barry Middleton 20 March 2016

Glad you liked it. I have been writing poetry for about 50 years. This is one of my favorites.

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