Agata Konopka

Rookie (September 30,1988 / Poland)

Kiss

Poem by Agata Konopka

The assault of the lips
filled with potential
electric shock
wet bliss
sweetest thing
is this
bubblegum, sugar
could not compare
with the taste of your kiss
steady and smooth
filled with the passion
of your embrace


Comments about Kiss by Agata Konopka

  • * Sunprincess * (7/19/2015 4:55:00 PM)

    ............bubble gum sugar could not compare...beautiful line...thanks for sharing ★(Report)Reply

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  • Jon Lloyd (11/16/2005 11:06:00 AM)

    Beautifully put Agata. Kissing is certainly one of life'; s great pleasures, elegantly, and passionately captured by yuou in verse. Nice. Jon.(Report)Reply

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  • Sukumar ChoudhuriSukumar Choudhuri (3/10/2005 2:40:00 AM)

    Agata.

    You could very well put your feelings of this devine experience.

    With all my best wishes and love.

    Sukumar(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 24, 2005